32nd Award,Highly Commended: Fiona Lynch

Low Altitude

by Fiona Lynch

You think you’re doing ok, definitely not over it, but you’re starting to venture out, working, shopping, dropping the kids off to squads for some semblance of normal, when you lock on someone in the pool car park—about the right height, mousey hair, same sartorially disastrous tracksuit—you will him to turn because the profile is uncanny, even flicking his head to redirect a miscreant fringe in a way that’s tattooed on you, and as if he’s heard, he pivots—but the nose is all wrong, hair middle-parted and you feel it in your guts like a plane dropping too fast—a moment you try to conceal because it’s probably nothing and you don’t want to seem like the nervy type, which is odd because if a plane is going down, bogus zen won’t change the outcome—so what if passengers think you’re a panic merchant—and that’s when the eldest of your chlorinated children asks what munchies you brought because they’re always ravenous after clocking laps and you realise you only have puppy snacks for the expensive, untrainable mutt who seems to be an exception to the poodle gene smarts, so you swing into McDonalds for fries to subvert several kilometres of whingeing because you don’t have the stomach for it and may say something regrettable to three kids who are aching for their dad—and fried food (using the term loosely) plus packets of prone-to-explode barbeque sauce seem innocuous compared to thoughts about becoming one of those mums who brews a family-size batch of warm milk and barbiturates, which won’t ever happen, but similar to other options that won’t be exercised, is curiously comforting, like puppy school, or a life jacket with a dinky torch and a two-dollar whistle.

About the Author

Fiona Lynch is an Australian writer who lives by the bay. Fiona won the Fractured Lit Winter Flash Challenge (2023) and her flash has been published in The Waxed Lemon, Reflex Press, and shortlisted in the Bridport Prize and Bath Flash Fiction Prize (2024). Her poetry has appeared in Australian Book Review, Cordite Poetry Review, Heroines Vol 3, Aesthetica Award and Fish Prize anthologies. Fiona was a prize winner in the ACU and Grieve Poetry Awards. She has written television comedy and performed as a stand-up comic at iconically seedy venues in Melbourne. Fiona is working on her first hybrid collection.

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Judge’s report 32nd Award

Thank you so much to Ingrid Jendzrejewski for judging this Award. Ingrid stepped in at a late stage when John Brantingham was not able to judge for this round. We appreciate the care Ingrid has taken in writing the report below and for her very interesting and insightful comments

Report
It has been an enormous privilege to spend time with the entire Bath Flash Fiction longlist. Judges often note how difficult the process is—how, on another day, the results might be quite different. I always say it, and I always mean it, but this time, I mean it in spades. The process of whittling the longlist to a shortlist, and then finally to the winners, felt like a literary Game of Thrones.
First off, I found it so hard to narrow down the shortlist that I requested an extra slot. Eventually, I found myself with a list of about ten (ten!) pieces that I truly agonized over—half the shortlist! I carried the flash around with me for two weeks, constantly shuffling the order, looking for the ones that lingered in my mind most vividly. In the end, I had to go with my gut, honouring those pieces that took risks, rendered unusual relationships, landed with resonance and punch, and/or subverted expectations with tightness and grace.

Would someone else have made a different selection? Absolutely. Would I have made a different selection on a different day, or at a different moment in time? Almost undoubtedly. It is a beautiful dilemma to have, and it speaks to the quality of the entries and the range of themes, styles and forms represented here. And, although I was sad to lose a few early favourites from the mix, it gave me the opportunity to spend more time with the remaining shortlist—time to let each piece marinate and unfurl.

As much as I admire so much about the shortlisted pieces—and would love to celebrate them all—my task was to choose the prize-winners. In the end, I found myself drawn to work that took risks: stories that played with form or expectation, and stories that held characters and relationships with unusual clarity, generosity, and complexity. Here is my selection….

1st Place: They announce a two-minute silence for the fallen in Morrisons
This piece is an extraordinary feat of attention, consisting of a single sentence that behaves like thought itself, moving between the public script of remembrance and a private flood of parenting, worry, pride, disapproval, tenderness, estrangement, grief…all of it and more in a single breathless paragraph. The everyday setting of the supermarket during a moment of silence juxtaposed with the focus on snack eggs at the deli counter provides a brilliant, slightly absurd anchor. I love how the piece keeps snagging on odd, comic, deeply human details that bring the reader in super close so that when details about the son gently drop, they land all the more of a punch. I so admire how this piece uses the mundane to illustrate the profound, and how it is both culturally specific yet universally heartbreaking.

2nd Place: More
This deceptively simple piece takes on a relationship dynamic that we rarely see in stories about illness, care, love, romance, friendship, etc., and it leans into the ambiguity and complication with wonderfully effective, perfectly understated pathos and humanity. The prose is laden with sensory details that provide intimacy and immediacy. At its core, ‘More’ is a meditation on grief, love, care, and the human desire—or perhaps need—for support, acknowledgment, and human contact from multiple angles. The writing is simple, straightforward, and quietly luminous: everything that matters thrums just under the surface like a heartbeat.

3rd Place: the rabbit hole i fall down at 3.07am
This brave exploration of the what ifs haunting a relationship navigates the complex history between the two main characters with great tenderness. I love how it juxtaposes the raw with the imagined and how the idea of Charlotte grows and evolves throughout the piece. (By the end, it is no surprise that she is the only character given a name!) The piece deftly mixes big issues with precise, specific, micro-observation and I love its final shift into magical realism-adjacent territory.

Highly Commended

Hestia / Dionysus
This quiet piece grew on me more and more every time I read it. The framing and that gorgeous last line lifts it out of well-trodden domestic-disharmony territory and into something mythic and archetypal. There is a weary, unavoidable truth in the italicised lines which perfectly capture the particular stasis of this couple’s relationship with luscious economy.

Low altitude
This is a superb portrait of grief and anxiety dressed in everyday logistics—car parks, snack requests, a not-so-trained puppy, etc. The central moment of misidentification is captured with accuracy and aplomb. I love the way the extended metaphor keeps deepening as ordinary parenting turns into a kind of turbulence management. The voice is wry and frank, but the ache is unmistakable, resulting in a flash that is darkly funny, painfully recognisable, and profoundly moving.

Other shortlisted pieces
I would also like to spend a moment celebrating a few of the pieces that were whisker-close to making the final list.
Ten Things they Never Told you About Possum
This is a dazzling example of the list-form doing emotional heavy lifting: each item widens the world whilst tightening our understanding of it. It is funny, shocking, warm, and finally fiercely intimate—a story that makes the reader work to keep up and rewards the effort tenfold. I love how this flash allows the possum to become many things at once—an animal, a catalyst, a symbol, a jagged little hinge between the ordinary and the unbearable. The images have stayed with me and the tenderness of the ending is deeply, deeply affirming.

When we expect nothing
There is a haunting, claustrophobic quality to this piece that I found completely immersive. The first-person plural creates an immediate intimacy and unease, and the repeated ‘We’re okay’ heartbeat becomes a spell, a shield, a crack in the door. I love how what seems on the surface like it should be a comforting repetition becomes a sounding of a metaphorical alarm bell. The rhythm and shape of the piece add to the atmosphere, contributing to the quiet, harrowing conclusion, and the ending image is devastating in its restraint: rich, suffocating, and perfectly placed.

I also loved the propulsive, electric energy in ‘Club Rats/Club Birds’ (and those last three paragraphs which take the piece into new territory oh-so-effectively), the landings and portraits of sisterhood in ‘My Sister’s Bunker’ and ‘A Hollow Place’, the lyricism of ‘The Unreturning’, and the well-rendered extended metaphor in ‘My Mother is a Kintsugi Vase at the end of the year parent-teacher night’.

Thank you to all the writers who submitted. It was an honour to read your work, and I am sure many of these stories will stay with me for a long time. Finally, huge congratulations again to all the shortlisted authors. I look forward to revisiting all these pieces in the next Bath Flash Fiction anthology soon.

Ingrid Jendrzejewski, February 2026

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Novella in Flash 2026: Winners’ bios

Congratulations to all the top six writers in our 2026 Novella-in-Flash Award, selected by Jude Higgins. You can read her comments on all these wonderful novellas in her judge’s report. The first prize and two runners-up will be published by Ad Hoc Fiction this year.

Winners

First prize: Unhoused by Victoria Melekian

Victoria Melekian grew up in Los Angeles, and now lives with her husband in Carlsbad, California. She writes poetry, short fiction and, on occasion, a novella-in-flash. Her poetry collection The Accidental Courage of Our Lives is available from Sheila-Na-Gig Editions.
For more, visit her website: victoriamelekian.com


Runner-up How to Get There from Here by Beth Sherman
Beth Sherman has had more than 200 stories published in literary journals, including Ghost Parachute, Fictive Dream, Bending Genres and Smokelong Quarterly, where she’s a Submissions Editor and the winner of Smokelong’s 2024 Workshop Prize. Her work is featured in Best Microfiction 2024 and 2026 and Best Small Fictions 2025. She’s also a multiple Pushcart and Best of the Net nominee. Sherman has a PhD in English from the CUNY Graduate Center and an MFA from Queens College. The author of five mystery novels, she can be reached on social media @bsherm36.


Runner-Up. The Hilltop Hour by Joanna Campbell
Joanna Campbell’s first novella-in-flash, A Safer Way to Fall, was runner-up in the inaugural Bath Flash Fiction Award and her second, Sybilla, won the National Flash Fiction Day Award.Her flash fiction came second in the 2017 Bridport Prize, for which her short stories have been shortlisted many times. Her short stories have won first place in the Exeter Writers competition, Magic Oxygen Literary Prize, Retreat West Short Story Prize and the London Short Story Prize. She also won the Bath Short Story Local Prize twice, was shortlisted twice for The Bristol Prize and longlisted for the BBC National Short Story Prize.Her short story collection, When Planets Slip Their Tracks, was shortlisted for the Rubery International Book Award and longlisted for the Edge Hill University Story Prize.Her novel, Instructions for the Working Day, published in 2022 by Fairlight Books, was shortlisted for The Independent’s Book of the Month and for the Rubery International Book Award

Highly Commended Writers

If Bluebirds Fly by Bill Merklee
Bill Merklee’s work has appeared in numerous journals and in Best Microfiction, and has been nominated for Best Small Fictions. He’s been short-listed for the Fractured Lit Chapbook Prize and long-listed for the Wigleaf Top 50. He lives in New Jersey.


    Her Permanent Collection by Fiona McKay
    Fiona McKay is the author of the novellas-in-flash, The Lives of the Dead, Ad Hoc Fiction (2025), The Top Road, Ad Hoc Fiction (2023), and the flash fiction collection Drawn and Quartered, Alien Buddha Press (2023). She was a SmokeLong Quarterly Emerging Writer Fellow in 2023. Her flash fiction is in Gone Lawn, New Flash Fiction Review, Pithead Chapel, The Forge, Ghost Parachute, trampset, Fractured Lit and others. Her work is included in Best Small Fictions 2024. She lives in Dublin, Ireland.X (formerly Twitter) @fionaemckayryan Bluesky @fionamckay.bsky.social
    Instagram @fionamckaywrites

    Beautiful for You by Fiona J Mackintosh
    Fiona J. Mackintosh is a Scottish-American author living in Washington D.C. whose fiction draws from both sides of the Atlantic. Her flash fiction collection, The Yet Unknowing World was published by Ad Hoc Fiction in 2021, and her debut novel Ancestral Virgins will be published in three volumes in June 2026. She can be found on @fionajanemack.bsky.social and as @fionajanemack on X, Instagram, and Threads. And more of her work can be found on her website: www.fionajmackintosh.com

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Judge’s report for 2026 novella-in-flash award.

We had over eighty entries since July when the ninth yearly novella in flash award opened. Thank you to everyone who trusted their work to the competition.

Many congratulations to the three winners and three highly commended writers of the novellas listed below, with my comments. They are 1st prize Victoria Melekian from the USA, runners-up Beth Sherman from the USA and Joanna Campbell from the UK and highly commended, Fiona J Mackintosh from the USA, Fiona McKay from Ireland and Bill Merklee from the USA. Check out the bios of the authors here. Read in Full

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Longlist February 2026

Congratulations to all the authors who have made our Award long list and huge thanks to all who entered.

Author names are yet to be announced, so while it is fine to share that you are on the long list, we do ask that you do not identify yourself with your particular fiction at this stage.

Important
We receive many many entries, and occasionally some entries have the same title. We are in the process of sending an offer of publication email to all authors on the long list. (please check your spam). Please do not assume you are on the long list unless you have received that publication offer. If in doubt, contact us.

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February 1st. Imbolc & the final day to enter our 32nd Award!

Today, February 1st it’s Imbolc, the pagan festival that marks the half way point between the winter solstice and the the Spring equinox. There’s also a a full moon tonight, the Snow Moon, so perhaps now is an auspicious time to enter our 1st Award of 2026. And if you are inspired, you could even speed write and edit a story based on this ancient festival.

Our judge this time round is Ingrid Jendzrejeski. If you are tidying up a last minute entry, check out her interview with tips and ideas for writing a stand-out entry.

And today, of course you will receive a Last Minute Club badge if you enter. This round our colour combo is cherry red and cream.

Thank you everyone who has entered so far and best wishes to all.

Jude, February 1st 2026.

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Everybody loves a badge

It’s the final day of our 32nd £1460 prize fund Award tomorrow, Sunday 1st February at midnight GMT. In case you didn’t know, we issue Last Minute Club badges to everyone entering on the final day.You are sent a virtual one and some intrepid last minute writers we know have received all of the badges over the years.

We began the Last Minute Club Badge game in June 2018, when K M Elkes, writer and writing tutor from the UK won first prize. The Award that time was judged by David Gaffney. Ken told us he was a last minute writer on that occasion, entering just before midnight You can read his brilliant story Extremeties here In the interview with him afterwards, he also gave useful writing advice, including “write hot, edit cool…, buy (or at least read) the publications you want to appear in (it creates a virtous circle. Pay close attention to language… don’t submit your sense of worth as a writer along with your story.
So if you are entering tomorrow, keep a cool head for those last minute edits!

The very first badge, pictured here was a turquoise colour. Often they are two tone, colours chosen by me. Once I chose a pink and silver coloured badge inspired by a beloved party dress my father bought me when I was about six.
If you are signed up to Blue Sky, you can head over there to guess. The winner will receive one of our published BFFA anthologies If it is two tone, and writers guess only one colour, I give out two prizes.

Thanks to all those who have entered. We’re very busy reading stories now!

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BFFA Anthology Covers

With just three days to go, we’re heading fast towards the closing date of our 32nd Award on 1st February, the first of our international flash fiction contests this year Thank you everyone for entering. As always there are some great titles for the stories coming in, one of which could end up being a title for the 2026 anthology.

It’s always exciting to find a title for the BFFA anthology from the stories that won, or were long or shortlisted during the year. The final choice is one which inspires our production editor to create an image. I love all the titles and images from the nine yearly anthologies we have published so far. At the flash fiction festival in Bristol last year, I offered a prize to anyone who could name one of the titles that mentioned animals or birds. Those are The Constancy of Woodpigeons Snow Crow, The Lobsters Run Free and With One Eye on the Cows

Here, in the correct yearly order are the covers of all the anthologies printed so far and posted out free to the worldwide to contributors.

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Our tenth anniversary anthology from 2025 is now being compiled (a little late) and the title will be revealed soon. It doesn’t involve an animal this year! There are some brilliant stories to read within its pages.

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Going Halves

Obviously, I can’t as founder, enter the first round of Bath Flash Fiction Award this year (it closes on Sunday 1st Feb with a word limit of 300. ), but I am currently writing for the National Flash Fiction Day anthology opportunity on the theme of bridges. Submissions there end on February 15th. So two February deadlines for your writing calendar coming up soon.

I need to make my story shorter to fit the limit of 500 words for NFFD so it got me revisiting an important flash fiction question. Does the story have a flash fiction trajectory, or should it be longer? Will it lose too much in the shortening? Or will it gain from hefty cutting? The NFFD anthology editors are Karen Jones and Sharon Telfer, both of whom have judged our Award, so they’ll be casting a sharp eye over submissions to the NFFD anthology to see if they are flash-worthy.

In her excellent guide book, Going Short, on the craft of flash fiction, Nancy Stohlman has written important chapters which help a writer make these decisions. In the chapter ‘Sculpting Prose: Seeing with the Master’s Eye’, she uses Michelangelo’s sculpting processs as a metaphor. She says ” approach your work with curiosity like a David trapped in a block of marble and trust that the story sits, fully formed, waiting to be released.”
In another chapter Nancy shows what cutting her own story twice revealed. First 248 words, then 127, then 67. It’s very interesting to see the differences between these three versions. She says you might not keep the shorter versions, but it will show if the story needs ‘a chip or chop or both”. She adds that in the cutting you may very well end up with two new stories instead of one.
If you haven’t got this book, you can purchase from Amazon.(it’s out of stock at adhocfiction.com) And she also made it into an audio book. .

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